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A Bloodthirster...

Kais had heard about these, but only in gibbered tales told by what he had believed to be madmen, but now one stood above him, and it looked very, very , real...

The Bloodthirster, greater daemon of Khorne, towered over him. Its stature took it to the foreground of vision, any other sight in the cavernous room seeming like mere optic ambience, no matter what visions they held. Kais did not notice that all other marines had fled. The daemon was the breadth of a tank, and it eyes, surrounded by shredded skin, burned with an unholy fire. To look in to them caused a pain the like of which Kais had not experienced. It carried archaic weapons decorated with evil sigils in its arms, which were covered in gaping wounds. Kais raised his bolter, and fired.
The Bloodthirster absorbed the shells into its chest, and laughed. Clearly it was not afraid of gunfire. Kais had soiled himself, but he did not give in. He continued to fire. The shellls, blessed by the tech priests of Mars, flew forth from his weapon at a massive pace, the cracking reports of the weapon blending together. The Bloodthirster continued to laugh, shrugging of the shells like a human would treat vaguely irritating flies.

It looked directly at Kais, and he experienced a burning. It seemed to be coming from behind him....

He saw a massive glow which blinded him, and heard strange and muffled shouts...

And then he knew no more...
©2007-2010 ~LordTakeshi
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Author's Comments

I quite like this story, I'm making it up as i go along, so any ideas are welcome :).

Do tell me if you enjoy it.

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:iconcrimsonistic:
Its amazing :)

You should bring the Necrontyr into the story. they're so old and evil, i think they're cool. Just a thought :)

Do you play Dawn Of War Dark Crusade?

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:iconlordtakeshi:
Haven't got dark crusade
used to play w/o expansions

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:iconcrimsonistic:
Oh right. its pretty cracking. Necrons just kick as though.

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:iconemovux:
they sure diddly do!
Awesome rhys!
simpley awesome!
He could get possesed by whoever is founder of his chapter.
not sure which chapter so can't suggest names
^ ^

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:iconmadmurch:
A damn good description of a Bloodthirster, although a Space Marine wouldn't crap himself at the sight - he'd just conduct a prompt tactical withdrawal...

[Guess which army I play as?]

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:iconlordtakeshi:
He's not a proper space marine yet, cos he's had no training.

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:iconmadmurch:
Ah... That explains the involuntary bowel evacuation.

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:icontazfox:
exciting:D

i like this a lot, even though i dont know anything about anything that this is about- seeing as i dont play warhamer or whatever, but i have still enjoyed reading these.

and by the way: whats with the soiling part?

it made dan and andy laugh........

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:iconlordtakeshi:
You would shit yrself if confronted with one..

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:icontazfox:
O.o

i dont really know as i dont know what one is, but judging by your description they sound pretty terrifying.

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